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April 29, 2008

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I agree strongly with this critique. I found the first half of the book profound and highly entertaining, especially Gregory's description of slum life. What bothered the reviewer and myself were his clumsiness and forced metaphores when it came to his attempts at emotional honesty.

Another thing I found irritating was Gregory's narrative style. He included many meaningless conversations that felt as though they were slapped together improvisationally, which can probably be excused because of the destruction of the first two manuscripts, yet still annoying. And finally, I found the second half of the book lacked the development and cohesion of the first half. It was as though his lessons learned and progress made through the first half had no meaning to the second. The color and texture of the life and peoples of the slums were lost in the hustle of moneymaking and the arid waste of the hastily described deserts and people of Afganistan.

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